Success Criteria:
4 theorists that are relevant-Terminology (20)
A/A/E Answer/Analysis/Example
4 examples from your product (Apply theory)
Thesis statement that answers the question= Justification
Extent of how relevant these theories are?
Why?- Post Modern/Modern
Personal Marking Feedback:
-Thesis Statement is strong/clear arguement, using a 'measure' to how my music video conforms to dominant ideologies.
-However, need a coherent argument and clearly structured thesis throughout. Clumsy written expression.
.Need a clearer structure to express arguement clearer and to be organised within timed management.
Copy/Paste added examples to essay:
. The music video conforms immensely to Gauntlett's, Butler's, Hall's and Bauldrillard's theory presenting conventions of post modernism in contrast to a modern representation and dominant ideologies.
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